Editing- Part Three and Completed Draft (19th March)

Today we had to have a completed first draft of the our opening. All we needed to do in this lesson was add the titles to our opening. We searched through various types of titles but opted for quite a plain font which was thick and black but quite gothic and dark. They were clear to read and blended well with the black and white action on screen. We placed the titles in areas across the screen which would not obstruct the view of important shots. We then kept checking through our opening for any parts that needed to be cut down or amended. I am happy with our draft however I believe the following things need to be worked on for the final draft:

1. The section of the couple is too long and not tense enough and needs to be cut down and have some more shots from the killers point of view. Some other music which is more tense could be used here too.
2. We need to re-film the photo pan in widescreen. These parts need to be longer.
3. We need to re-film the end of the victim Andrew plays section in widescreen and include it.
4. We need to record some voiceovers and other sound effects to create a more of a montage feel.