Today we watched everyone's first drafts of their Thriller Opening's and discussed what we thought the story was and what we thought was good and what could be improved to feedback to the group. We then got feedback from our teacher, these points were:
•Unusual approach
•Good camera work
•Good music choices - tension built at points
•Out of focus shot at the end - good ending
•Music - at points makes it sound like Television Drama
•Re-film shots in wide screen (that weren't)
•Length of shots need to be edited and cut down
•"Tom" and "Sophie" romantic section, looks too "happy" and focused around them
•Cuts more from "stalkers" point of view so that it build up tension
We got to work on adapting our opening ready for the final edit.
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